Well to be honest it's not for the lulz, I was planning to submit it to the BBC but since I can't get anyone to help read and critique (the BBC thing is a one shot deal, if they don't like it the first time, the chance is gone for good, you aren't allowed to rewrite and resend.) So because I can't get anyone to give me a 2nd perspective (Ideally I wanted as many as possible to create a census) I've downgraded it to just lulz.
Also, I figured it would get more attention :D But oh well, I'll eventually go back and rewrite that beast.
I told my friend I would get a 3rd p.o.v on it but she didn't trust me so I needed quick response to show I wasn't lying.
PS One/2/p/3slim/Vita owner. I survived the Apocalyps3/Collaps3 and all I got was this lousy signature.
Xbox One: What are you doing Dave?
