Soriku said:
dtewi said:
Khuutra said:
dtewi said:
Do people actually like those passages?
It's like the book is having sex with you.
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Dtewi how much do you read books
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Not that much, but I still don't like that passage.
I don't care if I'm like misinformed, that passage is annoying.
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I've seen worse from the book Nineteen Minutes.
"He pinned her hands over her head and ground his hops against hers. She could feel his erection hot against her stomach.
It wasnt the way it normally was, but Josie had to admit it was exciting... She clawed at matt to bring him closer.
'Yeah' he growned and pushed her thighs apart. And then suddenly he was inside her, pumping so hard that she scooted backward on the carpet, burning the backs of her legs.
'Wait,' Josie said, trying to roll away beneath him, but he clamped his hand over her mouth and drove harder and harder untill josie felt him come.
Semen, sticky, and hot pooled on the carpet beneathe her..."
lmao.
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Lol. Very romantic. I can write better than that...
(in all seriousness, I can, however, being better than that is not hard at all.)
