I watched the Tail Of The Sun review.
Here are my opinions. I think that you swear way too much IMO. Swearing in itself isn't funny. Telling jokes is. You do tell a few here and there that aren't bad. The throwing a bowling ball through a hula hoop from another planet one is an example. Work more on telling jokes and less on being profane and it'd be a lot better. Also, relax a little more. I know that it's easier said than done but try not to act so wound up.
What you're doing is not easy, and I wish you luck with it.
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