tarheel91 on 09 June 2009
Uh, these submissions aren't looking very professional. Check this one out:
http://news.vgchartz.com/news.php?id=3904
- "Nintendoeverything reports that The title allows..." (Either do nintendoeverything.com or Nintendo Everything; obviously he forgot to delete the capital "T" when he copied and pasted)
- "Satoru Iwata unveil the latest add-on for the Wii Remote"
- However was used in two consecutive sentences, but that appears to have been fixed.
- On top of all that, the article is very unclear. It keeps on talking about Nintendo's "title" (the word's use makes no sense in this context), when all it's talking about is a few ideas that are being implemented in software Nintendo is developing for the Wii.
- Finally, there's no link to the original site that posted the news.
Looks like it was poorly written and poorly edited. If this was in the forums, no big. I'm not going to jump on anyone for it. However, that's a news piece that's on the front page. It should look professional and clean.
