That's a good writeup from a Sony Fan perspective. Although they are relatively mild, you take a couple of shots at the 360 which reduces the credibility of the writing. Your review should make it so the PS3 stands on it's own two feet. Ideally, not even mentioning the competition is the best bet as no matter what you are doing you add credibility to the other console mentioned and any attempt to "bash" the competitor makes the article seem cheap and biased.
I realize the last sentence is sarcasm, but it could be construed as a "There are great games coming... but wait and buy it when they do". Sarcasm is definitely a bad idea in a solid piece of journalism. Instead, you may want to reverse that... With the solid current and even stronger future lineup, now is the time to jump in and enjoy all that the PS3 has to offer...
Words of Wisdom also hit on another imporant aspect. Trying to justify the price of the console implies it is overpriced. You might want to work on that part, too...
I hate trolls.
Systems I currently own: 360, PS3, Wii, DS Lite (2)
Systems I've owned: PS2, PS1, Dreamcast, Saturn, 3DO, Genesis, Gamecube, N64, SNES, NES, GBA, GB, C64, Amiga, Atari 2600 and 5200, Sega Game Gear, Vectrex, Intellivision, Pong. Yes, Pong.
