super_etecoon on 29 March 2009
If I thought of it as a short story....it has a nice opening hook. But there's no pay-off yet. It's funny that it turns on a little light...but there needs to be more to it. What do the other buttons do? What's outside of the shadow? Somewhere in that sign there's an "aha" and a "wtf" that shouldn't be too hard to find.
