Commando said:
NiKKoM said:
ssj12 said:
richardhutnik said:
This is an impressive engine and the graphics are - I think I'm prepared to go ahead and say this - the most technically impressive [object] I've seen on the Playstation 3.
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Credibility died with that poorly worded sentence. He is so professional he can't write an editorial with proper grammar.
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I'm sorry English is not my first language but what's wrong with that sentence?
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Should have said game or thing or something
the most technically impressive GAME I've seen on the Playstation 3.
Could've helped the start with It is ...
Instead of a hyphen he should have used a period then started the new sentance.
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Ya thats what makes the sentence completely awkward to read.