sc94597 on 24 January 2009
| Signalstar said: ^ I give that Essay a C+ Too much use of I and it seemed a bit too emotional and one sided. |
Well I hope I used "I" enough. I was presenting my opinion and thoughts on the matter, with some facts and information to observe from. As for it being emotional, I don't think I put too much emotion into it. If I was to read that speaking I wouldn't really be speaking in a sad, angry, or joyful voice but one that is pretty plain and montone.
