Will take a bit regardless, editing took a bit on the last one, and then we'll have to run all the edits by you of course. I'd do it myself, but I'm not an editor, and I'm very very lazy. Nice article though, interesting thought on how games are better if they focus on a single aspect, though I've personally always put the single player aspect higher on my list of what's important and don't enjoy multiplayer focussed games quite as much, that's probably because story is a big part of enjoying a game for me.
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