Cloudman on 08 February 2018
| Ganoncrotch said: Nice story I think, would be made slightly easier to read if you gifted it with a few  |
To add on with this, some periods and commas would be good to have in your threads as well. There's some parts that just go on without a pause.
Dance my pretties!
The Official Art Thread - The Official Manga Thread - The Official Starbound Thread
