The first one is really horrible so I prefer the Japanese one. Sadly though, the Japanese song isn't that good either, it's to generic and something I've heard a million times already.
I don't know what SE were thinking. FFXIII has been in development for half an eternity and this is all they can come up with? It doesn't make sense.
I had expected something like the ending song in Okami. A good song that perfectly fits the game.
This song from Xenogears is also a good example (imo) of a good song (maybe a bit cheesy).
Neither of these games have anything close to the production value of Final Fantasy XIII, and thus I'm very disappointed in SE's effort.











