Mise said:
I wrote down some notes while I watched your video. I'll give a overall estimate once I've seen the second part.

The notes:

- Sonic is what of the universe?

Ignominy.

- Okay, 15 seconds in and you're already sounding like the AVGN.

How?

- Okay, you don't like the characters. That much is clear.

Good.

- Funny that you praise Sonic and Tails and show one of the slowest
sequences of Sonic 2 (i guess?) at the same time.

Slow?

- Damn, the voice acting is horrible.

It is.

- Oh great, Shadow suffers from the Jack Bauer syndrome.

He does!

- At least you back up most of your gameplay complaints with actual footage.

Thanks.

- Oh good lord, the VA blows.

I know...

- The Silver & Shadow clips were overall pretty good.

Thanks.

- Slow your speech down. Jokes don't work if the audience doesn't get a
moment to laugh.

I know. I will fix it all once I revise the revision.

- AARGH VOICE ACTING MAKE IT STOP

*MUTE*

- The game can only have a single "worst part". You've had roughly five of those
so far. Hyperbole is a part of any rant, but cut it down a bit.

Where?

- The Accordion player owns everything.

He does? I was thinking of removing him. I guess I'll keep him.

- Oh great, bestiality in a Sonic game.

Like the Nerd always said... (You know the rest)

- SONIC STOP RAPING MY EARS

Someone needs to duct tape his mouth shut.

- The loading sequence thing worked slightly better on this one.

Still not perfect though.

- Estimated Shit count of the review so far: 15. Cut down on the cussing, please.

Definitely. Somehow, more always find their way through.