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Kimi wa ne tashika ni ano toki watashi no soba ni ita

Itsudatte itsudatte itsudatte

Sugu yoko de waratteita

Nakushitemo torimodosu kimi wo

I will never leave you

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Honestly, just paragraph it and get rid of commas. Only put commas in for lists, direct addresses, and tag questions. It makes it easier.



Kimi wa ne tashika ni ano toki watashi no soba ni ita

Itsudatte itsudatte itsudatte

Sugu yoko de waratteita

Nakushitemo torimodosu kimi wo

I will never leave you

Hey, I just got a memory blank. Are batons used in cross country, or track and field. I want to be like, "In this part of the game, you're forced to play as Tails, like it's cross country," to signify, the passing of the baton.



Okay, don't worry about the grammar. I want to know, if that context is better, or if I should simplify, like this? The entire review, is way, way, way bigger than that. Now, should I simplify like this?

Now look. Just look. Sonic the Hedgehog. Sonic the Hedgehog. Sonic the Hedgehog. Why do they have the exact same name? It makes absolutely no sense, what so ever, and when I'm on the Internet, looking up the original Sonic, take one good fucking guess what happens?

Now, if that's not bad enough, why did they have to name this shit-making bee hive, after these two classics? Like, what if a Mario game, just as bad, was released, and was named, Super Mario Bros.? Mario would be so pissed, he'd remove the letter "M" from his hat. Oh, and he'd destroy the Mushroom Kingdom, of course.