This is my review! Tell me what you think in the comments!

REVIEW

Well, the review itself is good.

My complain is that you don't make an introduction. A review should try and tell at least what is the game about, the developer and the release date; that way people who have never heard of the game before can have a remote idea about what's going on.

Second, you should not start by judging its graphics. I do think graphics are something that have to be talked about when reviewing, but just not from the very beggining. After the introduction, a more "fun-approach" or "overall-approach" is much more needed.

Third, no mention about the story itself. You do mention the characters that appear (something that you should further explain, as for someone who didn't play the original Luigi's Mansion). Story is a huge factor for some people, and you should treat that point as well.

You have some style, though. I like how you related the main character or the Eeriness in the game. But you mix things up in several parts and that can get people confused. And finally, the summary at the end does not match what you've said about the game. You mention that innovation was not present in the game, and that graphics are so-so, yet in your opinion this is the best 3DS game? If you can explain things a little further, this would be great. I mean, I understand what you were trying to say, but you need to clear things a bit more.

I can say I like your review, though. You just need to work it a little more before posting it.

Ill work on that, thanks soooo much!

No problem.

Kudos on not using a numerical score, though. I like that.

Not much. but I have worked a little on what you said, I'm going to keep working on it.

That's great. The best way to improve is going on trying and fixing. Keep up the good spirit.

What do you think so far?

Great! This is way better than the vanilla version. There's room for improvement, for sure, but what you've got here is something to be proud of.

A++ for not giving a rating. Now if only all reviewers would follow.

Thanks! I'm still just starting out reviews, and getting feedback like this really helps me get better :)

Thanks! Yeah, I try to switch it up, that does get rather annoying sometimes.