VG Chartz Got Talent Final Round Entry: Simple and Clean by ADM-89

Alright, here's my piece of shit. Man, I'm so disappointed in myself that I didn't get it done in enough time. I'd say the song is 60% complete to where I originally envisioned it, but I just ran out of time to record any more of it. Oh well, it may not win 1st place, but it is what it is.

Just to let you guys know I'm not done with this, and I'll post the final version after the competion is over.

Alright guys, i wanted to redo this song and update it, but i just couldnt get it to sound right. So im going to use the original one i made so i hope you guys like it .

If the is an extra round or day or something i will make a whole new rap but if not i hope this will be ok for you guys

When i do finally get my guitar that would be great dude, it would help me big time to be able to talk and learn from someone who can already play so good, Hey who knows, maybe if spurge does this next year i will be able to rap and play the guitar at the same time lulz

And osed is an alien gamer from another planet. At least after his last video thats now what i believe lulz .

That was really good man, as fan of almost all types of rock that was amazing! Incredible job. When you finish the song please send it to me :)

Really good rap skills :D, really liked the lyrics, hope you are still raping like that ;). 

This have been a really good competition, no matter who wins, it was great to be a part of it :D. Hope spurge repeats it next year ;)   

Guys, I have been a lousy judge. Here is my final opinion piece, I have been busy busy busy:

Osed - You were a crowd favorite. When the1 posted his vg magic, nobody expected him to get toppled, yet your VVVVV video started something that couldn't be stopped. You then surprised us with Rayman and some more VVVVV, and many other incredible stunts you pulled off for us. I would be surprised if you don't win this competition.

Navane - You had me at Zelda's Lullaby. I loved it so much I actually listen to it off vgchartz. The song in the 2nd set allowed you to zip into the final round. And though the kingdom hearts song was good, it didn't catch me. I have to admit you were my favorite this competition, but there is someone I have to reward.

Before I move on to zero, Navane I just want to tell you that I love your music, and would like to hear more of you very soon.

D-Gray, Better days are gonna come

Wow, D-Gray, you've evolved so much since the begining of the competition. The begining started out strong, good attitude. I started paying attention to the thing I mentioned to you about the upward note you tended to hit constantly. At 0:42, you get a groove that made me nod my head and swing to the music. I loved it. But there were a lot of those upward hangs that I got hung on (1:05, 1:10, 1:16). I wished there were less of those. Regardless, I couldn't help but to notice the better clarity, confidence and attitude in the song. I was very satisfied with the end result. But just watch out for upward swings at 1:54 for example, if possible.

The content was deep, talking about a topic that touches us all, the loss of a loved one, and the birth of a child we can call our own. And you end on a nicew jump, at 2:10. I like the "yeah" there.

Keep it up, I love your effort! :D You totally impressed me this competition.

But what made you win my vote in this final moment was what you pulled off in round 2 with lose yourself. You came back with so much attitude that is not something I will forget. As much as Osed shocked me with his VVVVV, Navane captured me with his Zelda's Lullaby, I can't turn away from the incredible comeback you made this competition. That's why you were my vote.

Best of luck to you all,

HappyD

Guys, I have been a lousy judge. Here is my final opinion piece, I have been busy busy busy:

Osed - You were a crowd favorite. When the1 posted his vg magic, nobody expected him to get toppled, yet your VVVVV video started something that couldn't be stopped. You then surprised us with Rayman and some more VVVVV, and many other incredible stunts you pulled off for us. I would be surprised if you don't win this competition.

Navane - You had me at Zelda's Lullaby. I loved it so much I actually listen to it off vgchartz. The song in the 2nd set allowed you to zip into the final round. And though the kingdom hearts song was good, it didn't catch me. I have to admit you were my favorite this competition, but there is someone I have to reward.

Before I move on to zero, Navane I just want to tell you that I love your music, and would like to hear more of you very soon.

D-Gray, Better days are gonna come

Wow, D-Gray, you've evolved so much since the begining of the competition. The begining started out strong, good attitude. I started paying attention to the thing I mentioned to you about the upward note you tended to hit constantly. At 0:42, you get a groove that made me nod my head and swing to the music. I loved it. But there were a lot of those upward hangs that I got hung on (1:05, 1:10, 1:16). I wished there were less of those. Regardless, I couldn't help but to notice the better clarity, confidence and attitude in the song. I was very satisfied with the end result. But just watch out for upward swings at 1:54 for example, if possible.

The content was deep, talking about a topic that touches us all, the loss of a loved one, and the birth of a child we can call our own. And you end on a nicew jump, at 2:10. I like the "yeah" there.

Keep it up, I love your effort! :D You totally impressed me this competition.

But what made you win my vote in this final moment was what you pulled off in round 2 with lose yourself. You came back with so much attitude that is not something I will forget. As much as Osed shocked me with his VVVVV, Navane captured me with his Zelda's Lullaby, I can't turn away from the incredible comeback you made this competition. That's why you were my vote.

Best of luck to you all,

HappyD