Soleron said: Looks consistent to me, I'd love to see a backstory fic that is a serious attempt to bring everything together. If you can get one polished chapter by the end of the month that would be better than a rush to fit all those ideas in.
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It was you suggesting I write a fanfic that explained why Luna was stronger that made me think about this idea actually. I wanted to fill the plotholes left for that part of the story. The other two parts explain that as well (they cover how Luna and Celestia came to be in charge of the Sun and the Moon, how Luna became Nightmare Moon (and why Nightmare Moon is more powerful than Luna), why Celestia only banished Nightmare Moon rather than changing her back into Luna despite being said to have access to the Elements of Harmony, why the Element of Magic was missing whilst the others were still there and why the original (I assume Canterlot seeing as Luna states that is where she is from) was destroyed in the second episode).
That is probably a better idea than my original one (to do it part by part), I'll focus on the Prologue and Chapter 1, I want this to be really good so more people than just us lot can appreciate it.
Also, since Discord is in this I would really appreciate some chaotic ideas, it's actually pretty hard to come up with things for him to do but I don't want him acting normally purely because I can't come up with ideas personally.