What it sounds like to me, is it was really good. It just, could've been changed some, in your opinion. To make you guess more about what everything. This movie seems similar in structure to say minority report... (atleast what I got from your description and IMO obviously)
Would the difference be similar to what you wanted to do lets say, for you lets compare this to blade runner.
The theatrical release. Which had harrison ford narrating everything. The Unicorn Dream was removed. (Because of the Studio)
To the directors cut/final cut.













