blink182 on 13 July 2008
| super_etecoon said: Here's a little tip about posting on the internet: We're all in a hurry...to get to the next thread, the next piece of news, out the door, etc. Take a look at a newspaper article the next time you can...and notice how it is structured. Nearly every paragraph is a sentence. Sometimes they are a little longer. This allows someone in a hurry to skim over the article without having to actually read everything. In short, when I see a block of text like that....I'm bored before I begin. Try breaking it up into smaller pieces....preferably with the gist of your idea clear and early. Just a helpful hint. |
lol, cheers for the pointers, it's one of my biggest faults, i ramble on far too much sometimes and my initial point gets lost in a sea of words.
nintendo and sega fan since i was old enough to hold a game controller.
note: my games collection on my profile is only 20ish% complete, i've got a boatload of 360,saturn and dreamcast games to add and a few ps3 games, thanks :)
