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BraLoD said:
KLAMarine said:

"Funny to know you aspire to write and yet don't understand why something happens when you have a cutscene displaying it directly for you."

>elaborate with examples, please.

Spoiler!
You were confused why Ellie was mad with Joel after she said in an earlier cutscene that they were done for after discovering he lied for her for years and choose to kill her change of being the cure to the world.

You were also very focused in hammering a sex scene between two people that loved each other for years and were kept apart while revenge was consuming one of them.

As a bonus unrelated to your question but very important for the mattter, you were just recommending someone to sell a game you never played and are keeping a thread of a game you don't like alive just to spread your agenda over it.

You clearly can't either comprehend what the game laid in front of your eyes neither that you have a clear set mind against it, yet you wanna criticize other people writing skills while trying to be a writer yourself, with zero respect and understanding of their work.

Spoiler!
You were confused why Ellie was mad with Joel after she said in an earlier cutscene that they were done for after discovering he lied for her for years and choose to kill her change of being the cure to the world.

No, I'm aware the game provides an explanation. The problem is I don't buy the explanation given. I don't find it believable that

Spoiler!

Ellie would be that angry at Joel over him saving her life. I recall Ellie having abandonment issues in the first game (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6Csw8G6yruE), I'd have expected Ellie would be somewhat elated Joel refused to abandon her on the surgery table.

KratosLives said:
KLAMarine said:

On the contrary, this whole debacle makes me more interested. As an aspiring writer, I want to dissect this story and pin-point what went wrong and learn what NOT to do when writing a story.

Nothing went wrong story wise . You think halley grossman is an amateur writer? have you seen her credentials?  I don't think you went in with the right perspective frame of mind.  Why do you think there are people who love it and hate it?  Why are there people who hated it initially, then loved it.  it's all psychological, your mind needs a bit of fine tuning in the right direction to really appreciate this game. 

"You think halley grossman is an amateur writer? have you seen her credentials?"

>Oh gee, guess that must mean she can do no wrong.