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StarOcean said:
pokoko said:
That opened like some novels I've read, the ones about the more awkward, seedier side of life. Jesus, I used to read all the time. I used to write all the time.

This damned, insatiable internet.

I realized after I posted it that it read very book-like XD he definitely likes going to dodgey places though. He's been to every bar in Columbus, or so he claims. He can only go to the ones that have yet to ban him. 

I used to write a lot myself. The internet definitely changed that 

You should turn it into a short story.  Maybe something Hunter S. Thompson-ish.  It can end when you wake up at beside an empty pool at an abandoned resort in the middle of a desert with the realization that the bewitching girl you met the night before that led you off on a wild, drug-infused adventure was probably an alien.  Your client, waking up beside you, can then say something very deep and poignant before shaking himself fully awake and returning to his normal self.