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Cloudman said:

Fair enough, I see what you mean in that this is important in moving the plot forward, but I just don't like how it's being done here. It feels.. forced, unnatural and not interesting. The following chapters have been predictable, boring, and.. just not fun to read. They left me disappointed and just hoping maybe the next chapter will be something good. That's just how I feel though.

And yeah, those sort of feelings are understandable in the situation she got into... but running so far away that it'd make it hard for the others to find her (even just.... skipping graduation) is taking it too far for me. I see how it is emotional for you, but I've seen the other side where people are not very happy with it, and well... I gotta be with them on that. o:

Yeah, I can see where you're coming from...even if I'm of the opposite mind (though it's certainly rushed, I'll admit). I'll probably concede on predictability as well, even though that's something I actually prefer in this genre. I might be in the minority there...I just really hate surprise endings in romance/rom-coms. I much prefer steady build up towards one obvious conclusion over something that seems to come out of nowhere. Though middle ground is good too...if possible.

Anyways, I hope you enjoy Hirunaka! I read it a few years ago, and thought it was cute. It actually ended the exact same week as Naruto, which is funny because my pairing of choice happened in one, and absolutely sunk in the other. :P #shipperproblems



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