I can't speak to 5 so what do you mean by "the crosshairs are off?" If you were switching to a back angle of the opponent in third person, what would stop you from doing so correctly, for example?
Edit: And no, it didn't suck! It was a quality first attempt dude. I think your second attempt should be golden if you adjust accordingly, and I mean that. Before you start editing your next one, just sit down and brainstorm the order they go in, to make a consistent flow. That alone bumps it up like 40%. Trimming down the fat a bit would only improve it too.
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