| DivinePaladin said: Oh don't worry I completely understand you on that. I wasn't a fan of this review going on nearly as long as it did because I know I could've optimized more, I was referring to just the history bits with the part you quoted. I just didn't want to shift the format too much around for my second video, lest I confuse any audience members about how I'm carrying the format overall - so Megaman suffered a tad as a review, as a result of its placement. If I'd done this review later I would have cut out cohesion entirely because it's mostly redundancy - but I like cohesion as a category to focus on and I didn't want to set precedent to ignore it or give it the short end of the stick because it's at the end of the review. But that's all part of growing pains.
Looking at the scripts for my next videos I'm feeling really good about where I'm at. I didn't think I'd have a decent solid footing as a reviewer for a good while. (Not to say that from a perspective of overconfidence obviously, but I didn't think I'd feel as satisfied with the channel as I do now for a while. There's obviously work to be done from here!) |
Ah, okay. Can't wait to see your future stuff!
