I would have explained why the boss fights seemed too easy to you. You do a pretty good job in explaining your reasons for your other technical gripes, but all you say about the bosses is that they "go down too easy," which doesn't really explain anything. Do they have really simple attack patterns? Does attacking them with their weakness take off too much health? To their attacks do very little damage? Do Meagan's power ups have too much ammo? Etc.
Also, you have a very clear voice with great dictation. Keep that up.
Honestly, I would invest in a body microphone if you are going to a "live" bit before and after (and during) the recorded bits. It seems like you're trying to sort of emulate Youtubers like TheCompletionist and, while I personally think it might do your channel better to do only voice stuff since I enjoy that part more way more, if you're going to do the live stuff, at least have the audio quality match up.
I would shorten the intro bits where you introduce the franchise. It's not really concise and gets a bit ramble-y. It's obviously fine and even beneficial to give a bit of background to a game you're reviewing for context. Just shorten it a lot. The key word is concise. A 12 minute concise review will always be better than a 20 minute bloated one.
This is personal preference, like really personal preference, but I wouldn't curse so much. Your arguments are presented well enough that you don't have to resort to that kind. It just makes the arguments feel cheaper to me. I wouldn't care if it was a review on a forum or something, but it's different when it's presented on an official Youtube channel like this.
I enjoyed the review, though! Much better! I think it would do you better to have the whole thing be a bit shorter, but that's my biggest overall complaint.
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