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dtewi on 10 May 2008

Aren't those three complete independent clauses?

Don't you have to seperate independent clauses with commas?

Kimi wa ne tashika ni ano toki watashi no soba ni ita

Itsudatte itsudatte itsudatte

Sugu yoko de waratteita

Nakushitemo torimodosu kimi wo

I will never leave you

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