It's definitely unfinished, and probably too long. I know there is something wrong with it. I just don't know what, exactly. Most of the insults are at the beginning, and at the end. Anyways, I have a lot of information that I want to put on Youtube, but doing it professionally is really harder than it looks. Now, what exactly is too passionate, so that I may change it, and where are there too many swear words? Where should the swear words be? Is there a general construction that should be followed, on how I should put everything together? And when should I talk about the characters? Everything else is a piece of cake. The only problem, is a script. I can add all those special effects, and stuff, but if the script sucks, the whole thing sucks.
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