youtube channel for let's plays, Fallout 4, advice needed

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theprof00 said:

can you watch my video #9 and lemme know what you think?
Also, I agree with all those points. Especially the not talking through cutscenes part. That's really annoying.
Thanks for the tips;

I would try to cut down on talking, just a tad, just a tad. If you have slight lulls then it makes what you say more impactful. When I say a tad I MEAN a tad ... just a beat or two. Get a better mic. It sounded OK but not as warm as it could be and a warm voice is good for Youtubers. Listen to CobraTV to see what I mean. You have a good voice for Youtubing so make the most of it. 1080p!