youtube channel for let's plays, Fallout 4, advice needed

[theprof00]

GribbleGrunger said:

Don't talk during cutscenes
Don't try to be funny ALL the time
Do a little research so you can drop some info on the game/development/actors occasionally
Play the game as you would play the game and don't rush for fear of losing views
Use your own voice and forget about any other Youtuber. Be yourself.
Don't constantly ask for subscriptions. Do it now and then.
If you get new subscriptions, thank people for it (not by name)
Make sure you update regularly and try to stick to a routine.
Have a good quality capture card (1080p)
Have a good quality mic.
Don't just stop the episode in the middle of something. Try to make the cut off point a cliffhanger.
Don't make your intro and outro ridiculously long
Don't talk through cutscenes.

I watch a lot of let's plays and any site that ticks these boxes is on by subscription list.

can you watch my video #9 and lemme know what you think?
Also, I agree with all those points. Especially the not talking through cutscenes part. That's really annoying.
Thanks for the tips;