I'm Making a Game! (Need Feedback, Please!)

[DirtyP2002]

Try to add something new. Like a level in the dark where you have to use a flashlight to see where you can go / jump. But you can't jump and use the light at the same time, so you have to check first and jump straight in the dark afterwards. That might be challenging and fun... And frustrating in a motivational way.

Maybe some minor stealth elements as well. So far it looks nice, but not remarkable.
A decent story always helps.