I'm Making a Game! (Need Feedback, Please!)

[Esiar]

AbbathTheGrim said:
Game is kind of missing some stuff. I think it needs a little more "flavor". Maybe you can add some curse words?

Instead of the elder brother waking up to "another day, another adventure" you could change it to "Another day, another... wait a second, where's my little brother?! That little shit went missing again!? I am going to find him and then I'm gonna castrate him twice!" or something.

When the elder brother meets that other guy in the vacant room that says something like: "Huh. You are looking for your brother I see." Maybe instead he could say something like: "I saw that little dildo walking around. He came here and stole all my furniture, the little prick. When you find him let me know so that I can come over and kick his balls until he passes out."

I saw some platforming there that wasn't very meaningful. Maybe you should add stuff to collect. I am thinking maybe you could pick up items that make reference to your ultimate goal of finding and castrating your little brother, fitting items like scissors, knives, machetes, etc. just for scoring points and having fun and exploration's sake. These items could be well hidden and add to the challenge and stuff.

I think the guy you play seriously needs a mustache and a Mohawk.

The snowman was way too scary, maybe you can change his eyes to blue instead of red. I almost closed the browser when the snowman came to life.

I liked the main theme song though.

There you go.

I don't think the cussing is right for the setting of the game. Although that's up to Ultravolt.