Scifi fans, can you give an opinion about this prologue? is it too long/ grammar sucks / lame/ is it fun to read / confusing ...etc

[Richard_Feynman]

That's long... But I'll read it now and tell you what I think. I had a look at that thread (looking for your entries) and I saw some comments about Revelation Space - you mentioned that you want to read it. I absolutely recommend it wholeheartedly - the sci part of the sci fi is very satisfying indeed.