The Gamer Report Episode 1: The Xbox 720, The PS4, Minecraft, Batman: Arkham Origins, and more

[kolbykooz]

fauzman said:

kolbykooz said:

Wright said:
If you want to push something like this, you'll need press. Lot of press. Try to make banners or something like that.

Also, the music is horrible xD And the show is a little bit too slow. Showing images or pieces of video is welcomed.

I dont have money for ads, but i'll try :/ The background music? Ok ill change it :D and yeah I only showed a few pics in this one, ill do more in the next :)

I think you made a reasonable start by advertising it here. It was not bad but it wasnt great either. You seemed to cut pieces of the clip quite a lot of the time and I found it slightly jarring even though your words flowed together reasonably. The music was meh and didnt bother me or please me. In contrast to Wright above, I actually felt you went a bit too fast with your topics (though that is my opinion).

You would also just switch to another topic within the space of a sentence without announcing the change of topic in any way. Maybe put the title of the topic up when you are talking about something (or before you get into the topic). Also, maybe you could run through the contents of the different topics you are going to go through before at the start of the show. I also noted there were some sentences appearing at the bottom of the screen - some of which seemed relevant to the topic at hand (i.e. mewtwo) and some that didnt. A few flashed on and off the screen so fast I couldnt read them (they better not be subliminal messages or else - heh just joking.)Finally, I thought it was too short (but that would fill out a bit if you added some of the things I suggested). 

This is just my opinion so no offense meant.

Thanks this actually really helped. I'll put up a list in the beginning, and title slides before i switch stories.  Thanks so much :)