Vertigo-X on 09 February 2013
| Makaha said: This is a song that I wrote about my Dad. For better or for worse, when I've played this song for my friends and co-workers, several of them started sobbing, even the ones that still have their Dads--just warning you..... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pxd2lYsFSq4 My question is: do you think this song is a little bit tooooooo sad? |
Great song! I like how you crafted the lyrics and how it sounds.
A slight criticism, though: your voice seems a bit muted/quiet in this song. I know it's a somber song and not meant to be loud but in my opinion (I want to stress this part 
) adding a bit more volume would make it better.
Keep it up!
The BuShA owns all!
