Your thoughts on my job portfolio please!!

[DanneSandin]

NiKKoM said:
Hmmm... I'm in advertising and marketing leading several projects each day, and we are like the devil... I nitpick about the smallest details very hard and direct.. (that also made me a part-time teacher in the field at age 25) so don't take it personal but take it as advice:

the idea for the videos are ok/good but the quality is bad.. I know you are a copywriter but we in the business are highly visual trained.. so get the same lightning for the video, a bit better quality camera, and get a better mic for the voice over.. she sound hollow and the difference in quality is noticable.. trim the first one to 1:30.. there are some bits which are taking too long... then you are wasting my time and my time is money.

and.. change your shirt to something 1 color.. it's freaking purple.. it's distracting.. it's like a shirt you bought when you want to go out on ladies night...

then the blog itself... lose the date.. or update the date cause when I see a portfolio date 2010 in 2012 I'm like no way buddy... get a cleaner template.. keep it simple.. make the video stand on itself without the notepad design.. remember that your targets have to actually click on the videos... so those precious moments they move the mouse they don't want to see a notepad design.

So concluding: it's not bad, but it could be much better by paying attention to details...
good luck.

All advice is good advice!!!

Yeah, I know the quality of the vids aren't the best - if I had had more time I would have done them... differently.

I'm trying to enlist my gal in re-doing the whole blog, turning it into something more aching a proper home page... I don't like the whole blog them at all really. I was thinking a white background with pictures of the samples as links...