TWRoO on 20 July 2012
I concur with Soleron/mrstickball regarding how useful others opinions of this timeline will be to you other than minor pointers, though it's nice to know that you think about this stuff as it can help avoid jarring continuity errors in the story (a number of times reading free stuff online I have found something in a story that contradicts something else mentioned earlier)
One minor gripe... was naming the colonial stations "colonical" a repeated mistake or intentional? I ask because "colonical" just sounds bad and make me think of guts/intestines (I was going to mention that colonical isn't a real word but apparently it's something to do with farmers)
