Soleron on 20 July 2012
Ideas are cheap. Anyone who's into this can come up with a cool looking timeline in say half an hour.
The valuable part will be the quality of your writing; how well does it hold a reader's attention? The actual mechanics of the story itself is far, far down on the list of why fiction becomes bestselling.
You would be better off posting a chapter excerpt here (or more likely, to professionals) and have them give feedback on your writing skill.
It's the same as posting "I have a cool idea for a game, it's a Sonic/Pokemon crossover etc etc" vs actually having a game demo.
