Has BioWare Devalued the Video Game?

[maverick40]

kowenicki said:

SeductiveReasoning said:

kowenicki said:

Nicely written. 

Actually, I think it's pretty badly written.

There are a lot of words just taking up space, the author's point is almost entirely unsupported, and the title is very misleading.

The writing level is very high school-esqe.  The author is in that awkward phase where he's just discovered relative clauses but doesn't know how to use them properly or with moderation.  This level of comma abuse would make an English teacher cry:

maverick40 said:

It can be a well, or poorly, executed process, there are, after all, good and bad games.

I wish schools would provide more writing courses to students.  In an era where anyone can write something and post it for others to read, good writing skills have never been more necessary.

I wasn't referring to the grammar, more the thrust of the article.  He made his point fairly clear imo... although I don't particularly agree with it.

Agree or Disagree to your hearts content it is an opinion article after all but, the grammer is perfectly fine and most definitley not high school-esque.