Rath on 22 May 2012
I'm a person who only has read webcomics as we don't really have a much of a comic book scene here in NZ, so I don't know if I'm your target market.
I've got to say that I loved the second link, it feels much more dynamic than the presentation styles of other webcomics I've read. For some reason it kind of reminds me of oldschool adventure computer games.
A couple of comments though - you should make each 'page' (that is the start of each page before any of the other text/panels come up) obviously linkable so you can start where you got up to. Also perhaps make it so when you click back you go to the previous page, rather than just removing the last text added.
