germibobi on 21 May 2012
| Bristow9091 said: Okay so... It was too short to go into much detail, but I'll try: First of all, I really disliked the special effects, they were way too... amateur, sort of like you'd only just found out how to use after effects (Or I assume that's what you used?) after watching a 5 minute video by some guy using a really bad screen capture program. If they were better then I could excuse the terrible... "acting"? but sadly, they weren't, and not to sound blunt, but the acting was awful too. I don't really know what else to say, except that if you put a little more thought into costume design (Actually look the part, atleast wear something yellow!) Those "bad guys" just looked like random kids with guns (Which they were...) and the whole thing didn't really give the feel of inFamous, more like some kid getting shot at by other kids while giving a pretty terrible narrative. The camera work could have been a lot better too, since it seemed way too basic for what you were trying to achieve. Sorry to be so negative, but I feel the best way to help someone get better is give as much negative feedback as you can (But trying not to hurt their feelings), since if everyone said it was brilliant, you wouldn't feel the need to get better at it, y'know? |
Thanks for the honesty, but I have to expalin some things.Also we do a recreation of the game by taking some parts of the game but not the whole thing. The main characters and the enemies in your version are not meant to look like the ones in the game. Also terrible acting is pretty strong, considering there were 5 lines in the whole thing and I've seen clips with much worse effects. But that's your opinion so I respect it.
