| Runa216 said: If you guys say so. Might wanna look into creative writing classes or something, because any writer will tell you the presentation of that plot was lackluster. Sometimes it's not a matter of opinion, this is one of those cases. |
i only finished Chapter one, but i can also tell how POORLY the script was written. i mean, it was so illogical of Serah saying that she has some feeling that she can trust Noel, but in in the next 3 Scenes, she distrusts him, and then, all of a sudden, she says sorry for it, and goes timetravelling. And a scene later, they act like the best pal's - ignoring the fact that theyve just met.
i like the game so far, but square really did poorly with the writing - at least at the very beginning.
PS@EVERYONE: i think this is a sensitive topic to discuss, so why dont we focus on other points of the game? i think the Semirandom battles, and the fact that you have to focus on a certain role for your chars at the beginning are nice tactical touches. =]
I'm a Foreigner, and as such, i am grateful for everyone pointing out any mistakes in my english posted above - only this way i'll be able to improve. thank you!
