hatmoza on 13 November 2011
poorly worded title because it implies the "man" was killed.
"Man kills"would probably work better if you don't want to change the title... but yeah, I'd just change the whole thing. Like a great reviewer once told me, "it's better to write clear boring sentences than to try to be creative with words." Sometimes the creativity and puns are just not there. I learned to just be straightforward with words.
I am the black sheep 
"of course I'm crazy, but that doesn't mean I'm wrong."-Robert Anton Wilson
