This is actually a pretty good review for a first timer but I have some minor nitpicks.
While it's nice and understandable that you don't want to spoil the game's plot, I still don't know what the game is actually about. you haven't touched on the characters, the setting or the overall plot. be more descriptive about the game like what it's about or telling us who's the main character or mentioning that it has a mideval fantasy setting or a sci-fi one...etc.
In the music section, you spent half the paragraph explaining how music is important to a game but you've barely talked about Xenoblade's own soundtrack other than that you really liked it and found it beautiful. which is cool since it's your review and it's your opinion but ,again, be a little more descriptive about it like describing what type of music plays during the game(orchestral, rock, pop...etc.), or describe if the music fits the game's atmosphere and flows naturally.
Other than that, it was a good review and I'm actually looking forward to your next import review. :D
