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Dazkarieh said:

DixieKong, it's great, but just a suggestion... try to reduce the "explanation texts". You should find a way to transmit your idea without explanation.

Keep it going!

Thank you. Yes, I know that the layout isn't perfect but I'm not a professional comic writer. I just had so many ideas to put in this comic, that it sort of ended up looking like a graphic novel. I will certainly try to improve the layout, writing, and art for the next comic.