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Final-Fan said:
It's pretty good, but there are some things that don't really make sense to me. For instance, Daniel Graystone apparently takes zero precautions like backing up the program/data his daughter's ghost is made from, and then when that goes wrong he just ASSUMES that Adama's daughter somehow disappeared as well instead of finding out, which he could easily check.

(This is even more nonsensical since Tamara's ghost was created based on Zoe's, and he should, I think, have been able to do the same thing in reverse. Kind of an incentive to think of this possibility.)

Maybe he was incapable of backing up the data. They're playing on some pretty heavy religious soul-type of themes here so it's not surprising that he wouldn't be able to back up his daughter's data.

Adama's daughter, though... I have no explanation for that one. I noticed it as well.




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