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here's an idea on revising your script

1) Write it like an actual script. Put in acting notations, description, etc, kinda like a movie script. It will allow you to imagine the scene, see how certain lines should actually be said, etc. I guarantee you that AVGN does this. Irate Gamer doesnt, but he's an idiot, and you're looking more and more like a ripoff of him and not AVGN. Of course, dont follow the script to the T, it makes your acting in the reviews and your speaking unnatural feeling, you need to improvise here and there to keep a natural flow, this happens even in major hollywood productions sometimes.

2) Dont revise it a thousand times. In fact, dont even release it unless YOU are satisfied with the quality of work. None of our opinions matter, as you say, you hate your reviewers, why release something you hate? In fact, you should drop the whole ripoff shtick in the first place, its obviously not working for you.

3) STOP REVISING YOUR DAMN REVIEWS!!!!! I have tried telling you this in your youtube comments A MILLION TIMES and yet you still do it, the one thing people hate most about your channel is the fact that you have to do so many damn revisions. If your review fails, whatever, move on to the next.