trashleg on 21 September 2009
^its ok to quote, and since its a descriptive essay its ok to cite other people's opinions but only if you credit them. and pick out quotes that are comparable.
source A says that "chocolate is tasty."
source B says that "chocolate comes in different colours"
these quotes are both about chocolate, but they have nothing to do with each other. look for a quote from source B that either supports or argues that chocolate is tasty, or for a quote from source A that gives the author's beliefs on chocolate colours.
sorry if thats a bad example. but its the simplest i could make it.
i hope i've helped, and im sorry if this seems preachy-preachy-la-di-da.
Highwaystar101 said: trashleg said that if I didn't pay back the money she leant me, she would come round and break my legs... That's why people call her trashleg, because she trashes the legs of the people she loan sharks money to.
