Words Of Wisdom on 29 June 2009
Too much dialogue per panel.
Take a cue from a lot of professional (or simply recognized) comic strip creators and cut down on the the words per panel. Also, consider making your panel-size a little larger and focusing more on expanding vertically than shrinking things down to fit horizontally like you are now. We're not in the Sunday-paper era of comic strips where vertical room is so much more important than horizontal room afterall.
