LordTheNightKnight on 18 May 2009
| blaydcor said: I can tell you invested a lot of effort in the comic but honestly it's pretty terrible, maybe you should find a new way to spend your creative energies. |
While more detailed criticim would be nice, I admit the flow of the first story isn't that good. I was making a lot of the plot up as I went, and I didn't set up a lot of the characters well. But the entire point of the comic is to hone my writing and drawing, and the space shooter story is where I try to step that up.
Hopefully that turns out to your liking.
A flashy-first game is awesome when it comes out. A great-first game is awesome forever.
Plus, just for the hell of it: Kelly Brook at the 2008 BAFTAs
