numonex on 27 February 2009
Paragraphing and spacing is needed in the op. No way am I reading that OP in the format it is at the moment. I read Soleron's account and the op is a fairly biased account on the X360 Vs PS3 scenario. Saying that you are a fan boy is not a good move even though its obvious you sound bias. Deny, deny, deny.
Anyway do some more research on the video game situation take some the advice that has been provided here and re-write that essay and re-post it in another thread and people on here will give you more feedback.
