PelshyX5499X334279YZ on 26 February 2009
Thanks Soleron for the feedback. Just in case you are wondering the essay was for school and I wanted criticism to get the best grade possible, but my teacher knows nothing about videogames so that is why it seeems a bit dumbed down.
I originally typed it in a word document and copy and pasted it into the forum so the format was changed to a huge wall of text, sorry.
